One day I woke up and heard something I never had heard before. I looked up from my bed and I saw something green, it wasn’t a plant because I don’t have any plants in my room. It couldn’t be a toy because I don’t have any toys at all in my house. So I went up to the bathroom. When I was in the bathroom the door closed and it became very dark and cold in the bathroom,suddenly the door opened and the light turned on again. I thought it was a person who looked at me so I turned around. I saw nobody but I saw something green. Then I did everything I usually do on weekends.
At ten o'clock the phone rang. I got up off the couch and answered, but I couldn’t hear anyone. After a while I heard a voice. The voice said:
-Go to the forest on the back, behind your garden.
I looked out and behind the flowers, it was a very deep forest. I went into the kitchen to get my keys. Then I went out into the hallway. When I tried to open the door, it was locked. I tried to unlock the door with the keys, but it didn’t work. Now the phone rang again. I answered. It was the voice again. The voice said:
-Go down to the basement. There is a staircase in your hallway.
I looked out and the forest was gone and in the hallway there was a staircase. I took step by step down the stairs. I felt someone grabbed my arm and began to whispers my name. Halfway down there I stumbled over something and hit my head. Someone whispers my name again and it spin in my head.
When I woke up I lie on the ground. It's dark. I got up and feet my way. Someone whisper my name. I woke up and it was just a dream. When I went downstairs and made breakfast, the phone rang. The feeling of fear came back to me. I answered , but it just roared. Then I heard the same voice, like in my dream. Today, the phone still rings but no one is there. Besides the voice .....
You have written an end to the story that creates an emotion of uncertainty and questions. It gives the story a really scary feeling, even after the story is finsihed.
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